Monday, June 1, 2009

Fun_Luso.8-9

Page Eight

This is the final entry of my classwork comic for CHEM100, starring Inspector Luso. Yeah.

I noticed Chief Bartlett (named for Yale President A. Bartlett Giamatti) ended up looking a lot like Mr. James.

Hey so, I'm back at Yale for a course on writing Sci-Fi and Fantasy. I'm excited because it's finally some practical narrative training that's pretty well right up my alley, aside from that sitcom writing class last Fall.
Page Nine

I found it very tough to gracefully plop in science and explanation without getting seriously texty.

Fun Facts: The cafe, originally debuting in the cut second page, is called "Toff" because it sounds better than "Tough."

The deadline drew dangerously close and each page just inherently takes a while to draw, so I feel the ending's a bit rushed. Ideally, I'da wanted to include at least two more pages: the cut second page, and an additional final page to break up this text and have a smoother ending.

Donuts,

Reuxben

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Bummer. I was hoping to catch a glimpse of you in San Marcos. I had something special to give you. Oh well... I guess we were never meant to meet. I will always continue reading and hoping for the best in your future, just as sure as you changed mine for the best. You are pretty much the most amazing person I have ever had the privilage of conversing with... yeah, pretty much. Till never I guess. :(

Reuxben said...

Thank you very much, I really appreciate the note--I'll actually be back in town by July, and will take advantage of my summer month at Yale to check some special drawings off my to-do list.

More on all that later,

Reuxben