
It actually saw print second, but that's because I pushed it back for a more immediately relevant Freshman comic, "Warfare."
Anyway, here's the thoughtline. The blurry, upper version was written as I was walking, obviously, followed by a cleaned up version later. Below both is a skeleton draft, complete with little facial experiments on the side.
I based the wishes on what I would wish for, with enough tweaks to make it universal.


I wanted to have more focus on the '11 shirt so that it was clear the guy was a freshman, but I cut that from the final, because of too little space. You can see some rewrites and alternate framing, too.

For MOs, I'm going to include the margins around the comics from now on because there's usually some little doodles that go on while preparing a comic.
Ok, here's to an even better semester in comics,
Reuxben
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